tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8580543175556687762.post4117601136939213120..comments2024-03-29T17:19:01.646+08:00Comments on A Catharsis of Ideology: Why Do I Write?NIGHTHEROhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07132503926440627401noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8580543175556687762.post-90428772572410095972007-07-02T08:25:00.000+08:002007-07-02T08:25:00.000+08:00Good reflection, although the main reason for your...Good reflection, although the main reason for your writing seems just an appendix to the history of your being a writer. It should have been the kernel of your entire reflection on the topic. Try to have a more in-depth study of grammar, in particular on the topic of prepositions. Do not make your sentences too long winded to avoid confusion of ideas. Shorter sentences are more potent. God bless.Fr. Joel, SDBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18347926100746045423noreply@blogger.com